Rough Edit draft 2

This is my second rough edit which I created on Adobe Premier Pro, this is still much too long to be the final and there are not much transitions and video effects therefore it doesn't have the full effects that I wanted to achieve. I have added inter-titles and the trailer title to this edit but I would like to change them in my next edit as I feel that they do not look professional enough and the actual title is on screen for too long which will bore the audience. The sound effects are not edited enough yet and there are many things that I need to add in terms of music and sound effects, hopefully I will be able to improve on this in the next edit.