Rough Edit draft 3 & 4

This is my fourth edit and I still feel like there is something that needs changing to make it have a more professional look and be more inviting to the audience. To make my trailer the best it can possibly be and to make it more effective as in looking like a professional horror trailer I am going to edit the titile and make the last scenes darker as they are still too bright which does not look like a typical horror film. I will also add 'From the Directors of The Forbidden' in the beginning of the trailer to make it look like a professional trailer as this is a common convention of trailers.



This is my third rough edit which I created on Adobe Premier Pro, this is much better than my first edit because it is shortened down by nearly half the size of the first rough edit therefore it is much more interesting for the audience to watch as they will not have to watch a long trailer which could have got to the point in half the time! I feel that my video effects add to the horror genre well because the flashes and strobe lights help get the message of the flashback happening across to the audience. I also changed the inter-titles to a more simple white, sharp edged typeface as I felt that the one that I included in my rough edit 2 was too complicated and looked mediocre.  The sound effects still need much more editing done to it however some of the sound effects do work well within the trailer but they still need to be edited so I will edit them to make them flow better. The whole point of the trailer was not to give too much away but still attract our audience to watch the actual film and I belieive that I have created an ambigious atmoshere which the audience will want to find out more about with this rough edit and hopefully I will be able to make it better with my next edit.